Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Volcano.

The fizzy drink exploded because the CO2 is in the middle of the H2O. The H2O is blocking the CO2 making it stuck when the mint comes along it saves the CO2 from the H2O and the mint breaks the H2O up this makes the CO2 get bigger and explodes.  
Now you know why mentos and fizzy drink explodes.

Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Writing with adjectives

WALT: Add description into our writing and use adjectives.

The _____ boy kicked the _____ ball over the ____ fence.

young                                                                        
big                                                                              
small
talking                                                           
shopping                        
little                  
cool 

picked 
kicked
bouncy
football
apple
eye
Beach ball
cricket

wrecked
doggy
rickety
ugly
wooden
metal

My new sentence is;
The cool boy kicked the bouncy ball over the wooden fence.

Monday, October 22, 2012

Writing-Describing a character






 He is a man he looks big  and he has got a big cup and he is so so so so cool and he so
ugly and HE'S GOT makeup on his cheeks. He has got garage in his hat and  he has got a wig. He looks like a funny character. What is on his hand? It is a plaster.

THIS IS MY DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT TO HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER NEXT TIME.

Sunday, September 9, 2012

Writing-Describing a setting

This shop is a big home for a giant to live in. The house is for a giant and this shop is as big as a home and people go around the shop to look at and it is a humumgus shop. The shop is like a home and it is a cool shop to work in and people like the shop when it is cool.

THIS IS MY DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT TO LET ME KNOW HOW I CAN MAKE IT BETTER NEXT TIME.

Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Sad poem

IF SADNESS WAS A COLOUR IT WOULD  BE BLUE LKE A BLUE SKY
IF SADNESS WAS A TASTE IT WOULD TASTE LIKE SALT WATER
IF SADNESS WAS A FEELING IT WOULD FEEL DOWN
IF SADNESS WAS A SMELL IT WOULD BE AS SMELLY AS A RUBBISH BIN
IF SADNESS WAS A SOUND IT WOULD BE AS QUIET AS  A MOUSE

Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Procedure Writing

We wrote procedures on how to make an origami whale I was good at making origami whale and my thing to work on is to finish my writing so that the person following it has all the instructions.