This shop is a big home for a giant to live in. The house is for a giant and this shop is as big as a home and people go around the shop to look at and it is a humumgus shop. The shop is like a home and it is a cool shop to work in and people like the shop when it is cool.
THIS IS MY DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT TO LET ME KNOW HOW I CAN MAKE IT BETTER NEXT TIME.
To Filipe,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have thought about a giant who lives in this building. Why do you think the house would be upside down? Is the house big enough for the giant? What makes the shop a cool place to work in and visit?
Have a think about these questions and comment back to me with some more descriptive writing.
From Mrs Head